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Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 2) The Drop of a Pen
i know, about the parentheses...i just couldn't think of any other way, so i will probably edit that. this was all written in a short period of time, so nothing's ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 1) Chocolate Bar
he isn't worried about people coming in from outside...but also from people at the reception area. the darkness was kind of just for fun... and there's definitely security, but they ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 3) Space Call
Here's chapter three...if you don't know what the title is, then please look at the topic, or read THE FIRST TWO CHAPTERS FIRST. Lol, see ya at the end of ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 2) The Drop of a Pen
Here's chapter two of The Magic of Chocolate. of course, comments and edits are welcome... Okay, I have now taken some (but not all, yet, I'll get to them all ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: The Magic of Chocolate: (chapter 1) Chocolate Bar
this is a story that's set in future times, so it's a sci-fi, but it's also fantasy, so i just put it in A/A. anyways, it's called The Magic of ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Paper clips and rubber bands
wow, that was really good. the title sounded a little cheesy, but the song was good. i agree with some others...if you ever make a vid, PM me the link. ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Words
wow, that was really, really, really, really good. that has to be the best poem i've read in a long time--maybe ever. (i don't read much poetry.) the first section ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Love poem.
it wasn't bad, but it needs better rhythm, and it was a little short too...i think it needs more detail. that's just me. (i, also, am not normally a poetry ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Atreyin: Chapter One
cartoon network...interesting choice. lol.
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Gorrath Chapter 4: Interrogation
lol...*sigh* i haven't had time to read that either
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Flash Fic - Sword Tag
i guess i've commented on this before on nano...but this is pretty good. i've read it a few times...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Gorrath Chapter 4: Interrogation
hey aet...can you send the entire gorath you've written to me on nanomail or yws messages sometime? these are kind of hard to keep up with here in the forums...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Fingers (flash fic)
oh, i just remembered the sherlock holmes it's set in some period of time around our own, right??
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Fingers (flash fic)
i liked it...it's a good story, but it seemed to be written in a hurry. "I’m in a crowd, searching for a certain someone. I don’t know who this person ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: The Traveling Christmas Flamingo Who Went To Iowa.
haha, THAT was funny...stupid tho... i don't think the kid would get a good grade for that anyways, even if it wasn't plagiarizing. lol!
Jan 11, 2008
